This is an exercise in which I had to write an story in 52 words. So in this I wrote it, got it analysed by ChatGPT and tried to perfect it, it underwent multiple revisions so below are those. It started form Draft 1 which was the Original text and to the Final Draft/version
It is never too late to be what you might have been.
Draft 1
Worth it
“Lets do it", said Robin to himself - the bird without wings from birth as he prepared for flying. The time had come which he was waiting forever. Excited, nervous as well as proud he was for finally fulfilling his dream of flying at least once, he jumped off the canyon for his first and last flight
Draft 2
Last Wish
“Let’s do it,” said Robin to himself - the bird born without wings - as he prepared to fly. Finally he gathered courage to experience flying. Excited, nervous and proud, he was. Tears rolled down his eyes as emotions poured in - for his dream of flying, he jumped off the cliff for his flight – his wish made true.
Draft 3
First Flight
“Let’s do it,” said Robin to himself - the bird born without wings – as he prepared to fly. He gathered at last. Excited, nervous and proud, he stepped to the edge. Tears rolled down his cheeks as emotions poured in, he jumped off the cliff – and the air took him in.
Draft 4
First Flight
“Let’s do it,” said Robin to himself - the bird born without wings – as he prepared to fly. He gathered courage at last. Excited, nervous and proud, he stepped to the edge. Tears rolled down his cheeks as wind dried them, he jumped off the cliff –tasting freedom.
Final Draft
First and Last
“Let’s do it,” said Robin to himself - the bird born without wings – as he prepared to fly. He gathered courage at last. Excited, nervous, and proud, he stepped to the edge. Tears rolled down his cheeks as wind dried them, he leapt off the cliff and the wind took him in.